Mutatedbunny Admin
Number of posts : 644 Age : 33 Localisation : ItsFuggincoldHere, MN Registration date : 2006-11-06
| Subject: >.> Wait, Buns does poems too? 2007-10-04, 13:11 | |
| OMG. It's a poem. Be nice, drawing is my forte, not poetry.
She gazed at the pale moon above And turned her thoughts to unrequited love
A sighing breeze blew through her mind Sturring up her thoughts not knowing what she'd find
A hopeless face turned towards a midnight sky A small voice asking to truely die
A tired heart strainging hard to beat A broken body staying in its seat
Tears dry before they begin to fall now A small whimper afraid to really ask how
With street below and moon above In which direction would she like a shove?
Weary eyelids begin to fall Allow a comforting darkness's soft call
Her worries will not enter here And thair once grinning faces will not leer. | |
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Ying Fa Overlord
Number of posts : 1959 Age : 35 Localisation : In your pants Registration date : 2006-11-22
| Subject: Re: >.> Wait, Buns does poems too? 2007-10-06, 10:28 | |
| I like it. Amateur-ish in wording, however, with the point and meaning of it---I'm willing to overlook it. ^^ Yeah, i didnt even know you liked to write Buns!! Yeah. I like it. You should illustrate it now. ^o^ | |
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Mutatedbunny Admin
Number of posts : 644 Age : 33 Localisation : ItsFuggincoldHere, MN Registration date : 2006-11-06
| Subject: Re: >.> Wait, Buns does poems too? 2007-10-06, 20:39 | |
| Hah, it's actually based off a pic I did. Then I was bored in Psych. But yeah, I write pretty often. My command, however, over the English language is not as strong as I'd like it to be. | |
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Ying Fa Overlord
Number of posts : 1959 Age : 35 Localisation : In your pants Registration date : 2006-11-22
| Subject: Re: >.> Wait, Buns does poems too? 2007-10-08, 16:31 | |
| Oh, that's okay. You have a nice wit though, so it makes up for it.^^ If i said cool things as often as you do, I'd be pretty well off. ^.- | |
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Mutatedbunny Admin
Number of posts : 644 Age : 33 Localisation : ItsFuggincoldHere, MN Registration date : 2006-11-06
| Subject: Re: >.> Wait, Buns does poems too? 2007-10-10, 15:40 | |
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